Tuesday, 6 March 2012

Shells

I  found  some  shells  to  play in time.

I  see  golden   at  the  bottom  of  the  shell.

On  the  shell I  notice  cracks.

I  see  bumpy  lines  and  a  black  cave.

I  wonder  if  it  used to  have sand  in  it?
by Charlotte

                                                                                      
 
Posted by at Tuesday, March 06, 2012

2 comments:

  1. Mrs EnglandTuesday, March 06, 2012

    I liked how you used different sentence starters Charlotte. It makes your writing much more interesting.

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  2. Miss MorrisFriday, March 16, 2012

    Awesome poem Charlotte.

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