I see a cow walking and nibbling the grass. In the paddock i see cows swishing their tails. Cows are running and walking on the grass. Crashing against each over. Cows walking backwards and forwards. We were staring at the cows. They were shaggy and wet.
By Zayne
Well done Zayne- What fabulous describing. I liked the way you used different sentence starters.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Zayne!
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you discribed your story. It reminded me of the cows we saw and gave me a picture in my mind.
By Janine de Wit (In room 9)